The telescopic text

This term my class and I have been learning to add more deatils in our writing. By stretching senteces we do it by adding things like adjectives, verbs, adverbs, similes and metaphor. We found this awesome new website called telescopic text.

Here is an exzample ofwhat  I did.




We were able to turn this very boring  sentence into a DESCRIPTIVE sentence. 
    
YOU SHOULD TOTALLY GIVE IT A GO
telescopic text 😌